That was wonderful. It took me a minute to get used to the tense you wrote in, but I really like it. The whole "potion" thing was great, and they both were so in-character. And poor Jiminy! XD

I loved this! You portray the characters so well and I loved the interaction between Sora and Riku. You’re such a wonderful writer. Thanks for posting this up and keep writing!

Wonderful, beautiful story. I absolutely loved it, it just cheered me up right when I was feeling so down. Great job! :D

Poor Jiminy...

...what the heck am I saying?! That cricket is so damn lucky!!

Apart from my blooming hatred towards that cricket... ok, so it isn't really blooming... it's been there for a while... OHMYYAOI!! The angst! The depression! The 'I-Hurt-You-So-You-Must-Hate-Me'ness from Riku...

...it all brings me to tears of joy. XD Angst is wonderful... and so is your epilogue. It had me chuckling for the rest of the day...

And it was all so well written. I love it when these things are well written. It's just annoying and depressing when you can't read it...

Going to faves!! *glomps*