Oh my god, that's so amazingly great. Because (I don't know if this was just your therory or if you watched the entire anime..) but SPOILER that's exactly what it was so it's so great! Kei-chan went crazy! SPOILER ...yeah, lol. And yes, the last line was great and really tied the story together. Good job!!

Just... whee~

Grade: A-

Kind of confusing at the end, but still very good. Great writing. =]

WHOA that ending was so wonderfully tragic and unexpectedly twisted, I love it, you really got the mood of When They Cry down!

Wow, this was great. Good job.