o.o 0.0please wrtie more of this...

wow, such a good story, can't believe i finished this in one day.

I love your writing style. It's wonderful. And I think the chapter titles are great.

It is 4 am and I blame you. And I'm sick. And that story was THAT amazing. You have a magic keyboard. Or magic fingers. Or both. Just... wow. Magic.

!1oneone
This is such an AWESOME story! In that chapter when Kaiba takes Yuugi back to Domino, I laughed so hard I cried! This story was sad and funny and happy and scary and lovely and awesome! I LIKE IT!
...sorry, sugar high and i am lacking sleep. realy awesome story (again)

Awah! I loved this story so much! ^^
Very well-written, i enjoyed EVERY second!

You rock! *adds to favs*

HAHAHAHA!!

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I laughed so so hard when you wrote the lemons like that!! XD
Next chapter!

Aw...I love Yugi and Yami! *huggles them both happily*

Next chappie! ^^

WHAT?!?!?!

WHAT, WHAT, WHAT THE HELL?!
Yugi? KILL SOMEONE?!

How could they be so stupid?!?!?! AARGH!
Next chapter!

O!! Yami kill her?! I HOPE SO! Nobody shoots Yugi and gets away with it! *shakes fist*

I love this story!

Going to next chapter!

THIS STORY IS AMAZING! Yuugi... Yami... it... they... this... it's...gah this story is just too good for words! Your writing style is wonderful and the plot was terrific! So many try and fail to put together something like this and you have pulled it off so beautifully! I applaud you! I loved the interaction between Yugi and the other Yugi, the way you described their sense of touch, communication and so forth. I also liked the way you described their issues with names and how the other Yuugi was not really Yuugi at all. The flashbacks to the murder, of Jounouchi dying were so sad and ironic. And the humor was written very well and made me crack up to the point that projectiles were being thrown at me by my very annoyed family! XD

This entire story is laced with underlying themes that make it so much more human than a lot of the writing I've seen on this site. Well done, definitely worth the time to read and most certainly and excellent addition to my favorites list!

-YG

PS. I loved the hilarious names you made for the deferent businesses! “ Meat Goes In Your Face Deliciously!" “Why Yes, We Do Wash Our Linens!” "The Domino City Institute For The Improvement And Possible Restoration Of Mental Health for Those Who Can Afford It" XD

asdfjkl;lakdjfa;l! i was reading this story on lj a long long time ago, but i got distracted and forgot all about it. but then i read written in the stars by technicolor nina, and she quoted you in her profile, so then i looked you up, and then i saw this and then my brain exploded. the endd. so yeah, i just wanted to say that. i really wish i had some constructive criticism to share with you, but i haven't put my brain back together yet. :(

nice

That was truly a really great story. the impossibly long names had me chuckling everytime I read one.

Thank you for working so hard at this fic, I can tell and am greatful. I loved it - stayed up longer then I even want to recall trying to finish it lol.

Thanks again.

Wow... just.. wow. I do not know how where to start. This is no doubt an amazing story, long no doubt - but it isn't a negative thing. I could imagine the places and rooms so clearly! The detail and storyline in itself was wonderful. It would be great if you could manage a sequel to this - whether it be long or not. For instance Yugi discovering his 'mou hitori no boku's' or 'Yami's' real name - Atemu, and the darker Yuugi gaining his own body or something.
But still - fabulous story, magnificent in just... wow - so many ways. Well done.