Aw...That's a really lovely story and I for one are hoping that they get back together *wink*

i love it!

you should make story a few years later i would really love it!

such a wonderful story

This is really great work! Not everyone can keep the readers reading on. This story is amazing!

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Retsu/Jushiro is one of my FAV bleach pairings D

Not bad, the transition from friendship to romance seemed abrupt, but it's not bad overall.

I am really enjoying this. Being an Unohana fan, I can't wait to see where this story is going. Keep bringing the great stories!

beautiful, that is the word to describe not just this chapter, but the whole story. keep up the good work

some of teh conversation is just way too cliched.

This is a great story, and it's not a pairing I've come across before. Hoping to read more soon!

That was really good. Will you make more chapters? Please.

This is good, I particularly like Unohana stories so this was a treat for me. Keep up the good work.