 Emily 3/17/12 . chapter 1 That was a good story, I loved it! |
 sweetgilda 12/29/11 . chapter 5I wish you could finish the story, I much Hustad alternate universes, greetings
happy new year |
 xxlila4hunnyxx 4/18/10 . chapter 5That was really well written! :D xx hope you update soon. |
 WhimsicalClouds 9/15/07 . chapter 5fabulous story |
 Kaika-sama 2/11/07 . chapter 5Where the hell is the bloody ending then? Or better, the rest of the story? Don't tell me you went up and died. C'mon, people want to know what happens next. A battle of 19 vs. Bra? Update! |
 TheMindofAynRand 7/11/06 . chapter 1Beautiful story.
Please update. |
 cathaya 12/29/05 . chapter 5Oh please, I hope you continue this story eventually (or maybe you have, posted someewhere else. I'm going to go check your bio after this review just in case). I love it. I really do. It's a beauitful perception of the events of some of the most interesting Dragonball Z sagas, and I'd like to see how it continues, how Bra's character develops.
I've never been interested in Bra and Gohan as a couple, yet it works in your story because of the changes you have made, and I find that I am enjoying it immensely. Your story is very different from others. Actually, after reading this, I really want to rewatch all my Dragonball Z DVDs.
Your writing is absolutely beauitful. I am utterly in love with your writing style; it's so descriptive and captiving and immaculate and controlled.
Well it's 2:30 a.m. so I'm going to go check out your bio now, and then go to sleep. Theoretically. Merry (late) Christmas and a very happy New Year! |
 cathaya 12/29/05 . chapter 1Beyond amazing. |
 Cricket 12/9/05 . chapter 5 Too bad you stopped updating. I was really enjoying the story. |
 MercenaryGamma 6/17/05 . chapter 5 Having just stumbled onto this fic, I'd like to say that I've enjoyed the slight differences that have been cascading through this fic simply because of the change in order of birth for two children.
I do, however, feel a bit saddened that it's been nearly two years since an update has been made to this fic, especially considering that you've stated in the last chapter that you have an ending.
I hope at some point, you'll be able to return to this story. |
 kikyo 3/28/05 . chapter 5 another good piece. very original. but i fell as if you've put bra to much in trunk's shoes and gotten rid of some of her temper. she seems to have more of trunk's calm, cool side than actual bra. also when she comes back from the past i think she over reacts when she finds gohan's gotten worse. she should have only acted under such measures if he had died. you did an wonderful job on hope. very good job over all. bra as a fighter is a very intresting prospect and you did a great job of laying her character out. |
 ObiOtaku16 1/11/05 . chapter 3GO BRA! SHOW THEM WHAT YOU'RE MADE OF! |
 ObiOtaku16 1/11/05 . chapter 2HE'S STILL ALIVE! HURRAH! CELEBRATION! *dances around happily* |
 ObiOtaku16 1/11/05 . chapter 1YES! FINALLY! SOMEONE WHO PAIRS UP BRA AND GOHAN IN THE MIRAI UNIVERSE! I've been wondering if anyone was going to do this, or if I have to do it myself. For that dear author, I thank you. Write more please! |
 Raven Shinobi 12/2/04 . chapter 5I really like the idea of this story and I've immensly enjoyed your writing. Hope you update soon. |