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flossiemae 2008-06-03 ch 7,	abusesweet story
flossiemae 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abusei love old time stories.. this ones great
irishgirl32 2008-05-05 ch 7,	abuseso are you like completly sick of me yet lol i must of filled up your mail box nicely. anyways on with the story... wow lots of information in this chapter it connected lots of the pieces thankfully! m first kiss edward being edward overall a wonderful chapter yea. Okay so i saw that you havent updated this story in awhile probaly due to lack of response and i am not going to lie reading the oldin langueage/speak really does kinda mess with my head because i have to re read a part a few times before i completely get what they are trying to say but i really do like this story and hope that you will continue to do at least a few more chapters to wrap the story up or even better just start it up again. and now i have spoken my piece on all of your stories expect that halloween one which i think i will save my self the confusion but anyways you can party that you wont have to read any more of my replys until you update again but please dont let that discourage you from posting more chapters lol
irishgirl32 2008-05-05 ch 6,	abusethe flowers on the pillow way to cute and romantic i loved that part a hourse buggy instead of tyler and the van marvolous! aww they are at the meadow of course how cute
irishgirl32 2008-05-05 ch 5,	abusekinda funny visuallizing edward animal drinking vampire petting a cat on his lap or even the cat being comfortable enough to rest on his lap! aw they love eachother how cute. I think my favorite part is when bella asks carslie where his cousin is and all he does is look at the ceiling silly edward and him mysterious ways
irishgirl32 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abusehmm well i think the chapers are a bit hard to read because of the sytyle of writing and speaking in the time era. I dont think i would have survived. Its kinda funny watching bella realize that she is breaking all these rules according to society and yet she doesnt really care because uh hello it is edward m so um yea not much else to say about this chapter but damn i wish i could just walk into my room talk about edward and have him be there lol
irishgirl32 2008-05-05 ch 3,	abuseyea halloween bit still went right over my head lol oh well so yea i am not sure why but this story is a bit harder to review on. the others i dont really have a problem carrying on but i feel like i am not sure what to say other than its really good but i feel that doesnt really do the story any justice at all. i think my favorite part of this chapter would be between when edward finds her in the woods and then the ending with him kissing her hurt hand and the love connection between them that seems to jump off the page!
irishgirl32 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abusereview time review time review time review time review time heheh so i totally loved the way Bella meets Dr. Cullen its totally her and all her klutzyness and the meeting between bella and edward just as great as any meeting in the bio room lol poor bella getting her life turned upsdide down even more o i short review this time hmm whats wrong with me lol i will work on that hehehe
irishgirl32 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseCHA okay so technically this is my first random review of this story even though i just told you i was done until i read a new chapter but i was like hey why not read this story too seeming as i really enjoyed your other two stories so on with the review. I am not going to lie the end of it confused me but i am sure if i read it once more it will all clear up. that was an interesting history that you gave bella and i really cant wait to continue reading more of this story and i must comment on how shocked i was at such a short chapter after reading cresant dawn lol
Serena530 2008-04-23 ch 7,	abuseHey there. I am lovin this story. Its my first time reading it and I love it. I love the way they talk...I think Edward fits perfect in that time frame. I thought the tree branch breaking and them falling was very funny. I could really picture it happening. Anyway...I really really think you should continue with the story. I would very much like to know what happens next.=)
PLUR 2008-03-16 ch 7,	abusewell, this story certainly is different from most of other twilight fanfics out there - but that's a GOOD thing :) i luv it :) hope you'll keep writing it and update soon :)
Sophie 2008-03-13 ch 7, anon.	abusewow this story is just amazing. I love the way you write, please go on!
TheWorldGoesRound 2008-03-05 ch 7,	abusei really like this chapter it is cute please update soon!
Easterbunnyvu 2008-02-10 ch 7,	abuseAw it's really sweet and I ♥ how they talk it's weird but so cute!
Sorcha123 2008-01-22 ch 3,	abusesweet! i love it!

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