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| Patric Gilmore 2008-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent, purely marvelous! If this one was so good, imagine what you might do if you wrote one about Atreyu and Moonchild |
| Zachary A. 2008-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a touching story. It really speaks a lot about the loss of childhood fantasy amidst growing up and personal tragedy. Great story. |
| JadeAshes 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE how you ended it. Very traditional to the movies. JA |
| Ldihawk 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseVery well done! I enjoyed reading this and thought the reunion between Bastian and the Empress was beautiful! |
| Fancy Friday 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful, I am so glad I found this. The figure of the Childlike Empress/Moon Child has always intrigued me, both from the novel and the first movie. Her isolation as a young ruler mature beyond her physical appearance has fascinated me, as with her lonely existence in the Ivory Tower. I am so glad you made something of it and had Bastian mature. I've always been an Atreyu/Empress fan myself, but I cannot deny the sweetness of this one-shot. And your style of writing is befitting and makes it a pleasure to read. Thank you. |
| NorgePrincess Alexandra Noe... 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuse*speechless* ohmy...um..I..wow...I have been reading fanfics and books for a long time and the only other book that renders me this way is my own book series. You captivated and enthralled me. You definitely should be a writer of your own creations if you are not already. I am amazed and captured by the story you have woven. I picked this story from the list for the "Neverending Story" because I was trying to find something to read to my unborn child. Tonight was the first night, of many more to come, that I have read to my son or daughter. I could not have picked a better story. I will definitely read this to my little one many many more times. Everything was perfect and reminded me one of my top facorite movie/book. I no longer have the book due to my little sisters getting their hands on it...lol..but...I remember it quite well...and...wow... I cannot say anymore at this point. I wish I could but...normally I leave what I call "marathon reviews" but...sometimes less is better and...to be quite Frank...I normally save my favorite stories with the words "review later" in front of the title...this story though...I could not do that...I started to...and then stopped...It was like when Bastian would get captivated when he would be reading about all the adventures in Fantasia and he would not be able to stop...I am the same way with this...gem of a masterpiece. If anyone ever says that you are not a good writer and it lacks...anything... give them my e-mail address and I will personally discuss it with them. I know what it is like to love what you do and hear nothing but negative coments about it...and for you to give up and do something more...lucrative... I have had to stop myself many, many, many times from ripping up/deleting all my stories/poems/paintings/needlework...etcetera. Many writers write for the pure satisfaction of seeing that look of wonderment on their audiences faces...and if you do not get that and instead recieve grimaces or even those little digs...it destroys your self esteem as a writer...and they have no idea that they may be doing it to the next ED & Leigh Eddings, JR R. Tolkien, Jk Rowling, or...even...the modern shakespeare... No one seems to think about what they say to writers until they are alone and realize...what they said could have been the catalyst that makes you decide to give up forever on what you love. No one thinks that authors write for the sheer satisfaction of informing and bringing joy to others...we do...yes...some do it for the money but...at the same time...if it is just for the money...eventually, and rather quickly, the author will lose his/her/their zeal for it and it will lack the luster it once had. Like for instance...the recent Rl Stine books...are nothing like they were...I think...that he just made so much money but he loved doing it so he kept going...but because of the mass production of his ideas...he lost them just as quick...and anyone who has been an avid reader of his works will see that and unfortunately now...even I get bored by the 5th-6th chapter of the ones he has written in the past 5 years... and I tend to skip to the very end just to see what happens and realize I wasted my time because I already knew that was going to happen and/or it wasn't that exciting. I Lost MY zeal for his books...thats why the books that take forever are sometimes better...because of the fact that they were not cranked out because of a deadline. A great story that will be immortal needs to have you keep on guessing until the very end when you gasp aloud and groan because you know the story is over (I did that with this one). I am so sorry I have written all this it is just...I guess this is one of the main topics close to my heart and my fingertips. Btw... I am Alexandra and I would very much like it if we could talk again. :D Here is my e-mail: angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com -or- angelgrl198816 AT aol DOT com I would very much appreciate to hear from you again and I very much look forward to reading your other creations :D oh...btw...you may notice when you go to my profile that I have not updated...in...forever...I have been focusing on my book series and...to be even more honest...my mother found my notebook when I was 3 years ago and...she never approved of anything I wrote or created, and I knew it...trust me..., and she threw them away while I was at school. the ONE day I forgot to bring them with me and..anyways...I am avery ashamed of this and I hope someday I will remember everything I wrote...I loved them all as well as my main beta (my baby sister Hannah) but...I was just learning how to type so I wrote them in the notebook so I could type them at my own leisure...apparently though...that was a grave mistake... I wish you the very best and happy writing, Alexandra19 |