well.. i have to say.. this was really good :D well written.. and i like ur ending.. i guess now we all know why she wears white now.. xD

Good writing. Interesting 1st chapter.

These chapters were all nicely written.. I gather this was not the last?... do write some more of this..

Ja.

I like this. It is good.

Perhaps more concept in the dialogue.

Nice story!

this is such a sweet story. well done. xx

These four stories were incredibly cool. I read "Scar" some time ago and I really liked it. Now, I think it's great that you gave it the awesome backstory it deserved. Nicely done!

kawaii! that was cute!

Ja ne:

!*everyday-snowangel*!

Wow this fic seems really good so far. I like how the plot is building up. Keep up the good work!

Once again, I'm amazed at how you write. I great story, short but sweet. I also love the explination you give for the new white shirt.

U i finally noe y Tenten suddenly changed her top... o k ok i noe she just outgrew it... but at least this is a better explanation...lol... one question, what is the FOIL competition, is it still open?

OMG I LOVED IT! So good! :D

Ahh... so that's the reason for the white shirt. :) I really enjoyed this. All of the chapters flowed together and it was interesting seeing Neji inflict some (albeit unintentional) psychological damage on our dear Tenten for once. I'm also especially happy since in the end it was resolved and we had our little Nejiten moment!

Matahari