 Kathryn Angelle 2/2/02 . chapter 1Sheesh, what is Nightwing's PROBLEM anyway? Bats rules, we love Mara! |
 XXl 11/22/01 . chapter 1 Cool story, but I've got to say CANADA DOESN"T SUCK! Other than that the story was great. |
 E Kelly 9/20/01 . chapter 1Excellent, excellent! Great fun, and I really feel for Mara - she's a wonderfully realized character. Still right on with the Bat-family and their personalities. Loving the Mara-verse. |
 razor-flavoured candy 8/28/01 . chapter 1Oh, poor Mara! I can't wait to read the repercussions of her decision in a new story... ;) This was fantastic; I'm so glad you've continued this series. |
 Ghost in the Machine 8/27/01 . chapter 1 Read the three parts of this and overall, it is a pretty good story. (Couple typos here and there,
nothing to be too worried about.) As for what Mara needs to do, the basic answer is just chill for
a moment. Then reorient. Triage her responsibilities down to the point where they aren't such a
burden. Go hit on some boys maybe. Actually start building one of those models she talks about.
Take what amounts to a costume free vacation as it were. It couldn't hurt. |
 Facade 8/27/01 . chapter 1Wow. Keep them coming. Mara is becoming a fascinating character and I find myself waiting for the next exploit. :) |
 cloak 8/27/01 . chapter 1 hi i really really like th way you write, and this ongoing series of yours is one of the few fictions that iam waiting for, )
keep it up! |