Wow! This story is really good! I love it!

that was good i like it ^^

Wow in just 2 chapters so far a lot has happened. Please update soon I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I really like this, I hope you write more. Jiraiya and Kakashi are two of my favorite characters.

~SaitouuRyuuji~

Great chap I loved the childhood scene keep up the good work!

This is an idea so wrong...

...BUT OH SO RIGHT!! :D Update soon!! 8D This rocks so far!

i was happy with the first chapter though XD touhg some parts of it... uh... lol. anyways nice!

Great start! I like the mood, the last bit, and Kushina + road rage made me giggle. I cannot wait to read more!

I think you should continue the story. It seems like a good start and I'd like to read more of it.

No...don't worry it really good. I hope to see more!

Self depracating dork! I loved the intro was great and you really captured the biterness in Jiraiya and Kakashi that the canon rarely ever showed. Update soon and get on AIM you nooblet!




P.S Teehee I got an honorable menton nya nya!