That was a lovely story, i really enjoyed it.

Different. Overall flow good.

Aw...! Poor John! Poor everyone! That's terrible. Good fic, though. I rather like it.

That's so good! Good Job!:D

interesting story wonder if elizabeth will have ronon next lol :)

that was nice. gotta say, sorta annoying to have 2 rodneys and teylas, but thats always a sweet gesture. (is his middle name david after david hewlett or is it just a coincidence?)

i felt so bad for rodney in that scene w/ his sister!

good job

Great start! Hope you will continue - I'll look forward to more. :0)

I love time dilation stories. You can have so much fun with them. This was impressive with all the things that went on quietly in the background. 5 years is a long time compared to a week.