whoa writye more MORE!!

a short depressing story , very well written it gives you a need for a sequel make a sequel

KOOL

Wow! What a powerful story. I really enjoyed it. Nice job.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Whoa...not bad. I kinda like it...^_^

This is truly a masterpiece! This is one of the few stories where Brick is not an "OC".

Oh you did the fic! so bad i've gotten it too late! :(
but still. i did love it. chracterization, perfect.
fight between Mojo and Brick, was everything we could ever want. (sad Mojo was killed). Brick was an uncaring possessive jerk, and Mojo a conceited villain in love.
too sad for Blossom, too bad for Mojo, too awful of Brick, great drama!
and damn, agreed with Darcori. It's a pairing which you dislike, but youstill manage to making a story out of it and making it TOO GOOD.

Cool start! Can't wait for the next update
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(CRIES) I FEEL SO SORRY FOR BLOSSOM!BRICK WAS A UNCARING PERSON.

Holy cheese.

Brick would kill anyone. He and his brothers see themselves above the other villians and maybe only respect the Powerpuff girls for beating them to a plup.
I liked the way you fit Mojo into this story. Brick is all brawn and would only like Blossom for her apperance. Blossom does not really care about looks as much as intellegnece. Mojo can appericate Blossom's mind as you claimed.
The ending was good. I was mentally perpared for something awful to happen. I need to update my fic someday.

Excellent job. It certainly was a tragic story that left me feeling hollow and terribly sorry for Blossom at the end, but it was perfectly characterized. I was surprised that you actually wrote RRB/PPG (and I winced when I saw the character label), but I was pleasantly surprised to see that you kept Brick in character all the way and chose to portray that one part of him that fangirls overlook- his evil nature. Bravo! *faves*

-Slim T. Amoeba

THIS is how RRBxPPG fics should be written! Everyone was in character, as always in your fics and I could believe Blossom would sleep with Brick in this situation. The ending really caught me, it left me hanging but not on a cliffhanger, it just left an impression on me.

XD Voyeur Mojo is the best. It made this fic more awesome.

Well, when I first clicked on the story and saw the character label, I found myself asking "WTF, Commander? WTF?" Then as I continued reading with hungry eyes, I was still asking "WTF, Commander? WTF?" But then once Mojo came into the picture I had to smile, knowing that you can't write a PPG story without Mojo in it XD

I really love how you kind of nailed the RRB/PPG fans on the head with the whole look alike thing. I mean, seriously, just because they look alike, doesn't mean they're meant to be. And I also like how you wrote the Brick/Blossom pairing in a believable fashion, too. See? You even know how to write a pairing you don't particularly like. That takes true talent.

Oh, and I laughed when the "feelings in his pants" line appeared. God, I think that's become a trademark line for you. If you don't see the "feelings in his/her pants" line somewhere in the fic, then it's not a real Commander fanfic XDD

But...I was devastated when Mojo was killed at the end. I missed the 'tragedy' label at the top, so I guess I should have expected it. But I was really, really rooting for Mojo there for a minute, and...you're such a jerk, Commander! D: You always have a way of tearing my heart out.

Anyways, this was an awesome, yet sad fanfic, I must say. I was so happy to see a new fanfic from you, though I was a bit surprised. I was almost certain you had given up PPG for good.

~Dracori