Very nice story. Wish there wa more but what is here is very well written. The imagery is spot on. Very nice.

I love it! You got the atmosphere across perfectly. I totally love it!

Very well written. I am not usually a fan of Kira/Conner, mostly because the majority of writers mutate their personalities to suit their fics, but something pulled at me to click on the title and read.

I'm very glad that I did. You have done an amazing job keeping them rather true to character, which is surprising since you have them several years later. But you still see "Conner" in Conner, and the same with Kira.

I'm most impressed with the quality of this work, and I do hope to see some more of your work real soon. Great job.

this was a cute fic

PERFECTION. I love Kira and Conner!