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| MisoGirl 2008-05-11 ch 21, | abuseWhere's the MIB that failed to kidnapped her? |
| snekochan 2008-05-11 ch 21, | abuseOh no! Rosette! But now...can Chrono come to the rescue? Dundundun! |
| poshpuppy27 2008-05-10 ch 21, | abuseas usual, this story gets me more and more excited! great job! and good to know that Chrno finally gets to kick **! yeah!...Finally, Rosette can learn that she cannot handle all things on her own! (I tried to do that once, i ended up with a fever)...ahahahaha...anyways, continue the good job! i can wait to see the coming chapter! rest well...good luck with everything!... ahahahaha...that's all! again, wait *checks the thesaurus*...outstanding, brilliant, exceptional, first-rate, admirable, superb, tremendous, stimulating, thought-provoking, motivating, exciting, fascinating, attention-grabbing, out of the ordinary, remarkable, worthy of note, curious, attractive, noteworthy story! great job!...(i really don't know what the other words mean here) ja ne~ |
| kitty00240 2008-05-10 ch 21, | abuseaw...this chapter is so short! Is Chrno really going to win this...? o-o; p.s. great story! |
| MercedesRavenAngelous 2008-05-10 ch 21, | abuseAgh!! That's just not fair! Great chapter, but not long enough, then you cut it off at a cliffhanger! I can't wait for more! Please update again soon! ~MRA |
| VampricFaeryGirl 2008-05-06 ch 5, | abuseAw, that was cute. I knew she was a girl! Ha! I am a genius. Well written. I am anxious for more! And as far as the quote goes..no real clue. I'm glad you included that "cry when you want to cry" one. Who'd of thought that Rosette would be the one hearing those words? Good twist. |
| Starlight529 2008-05-04 ch 18, anon. | abuseJoshua is an IDIOT. i mean, i get why he would want to be treated normal, but he wasn't normal. he was sick, and i think he should have been greatfull that someone was looking out for him after his parents died. unconditional love is something hard to come by amd you shouldn't be so quick to throw it away. lucky for him, Rosette is a lot more forgiving than i would be. but, i still liked the chapter. it was cute. :) |
| MisoGirl 2008-05-01 ch 20, | abuse. . . I was half expection that punch to be spiked. |
| chie 2008-04-30 ch 20, anon. | abusewoah! I'm so excited about the next thing that will happen! It's definitely a cliff...cliff...hmm...cliffhanger? Yes! that's it! It's definitely an exciting cliffhnager! gah~ can't wait! But i can...so its more thrilling...so good! keep up the excellent work! This chapter was: exciting, refreshing, exciting,exciting, breath-stopping, amazing, wonderful,..exciting? and exciting! yes! ahahahaha...well...update when u feel like it! don't rush! ahehehe... i feel like an idiot...maybe i am...um...do your best okay?! chow~ :) |
| MercedesRavenAngelous 2008-04-30 ch 20, | abuseOnce again, well written. It doesn't seem long enough though, but that could also be because of the pace of the chapter itself, or with the song taking up a good hunk of the normal space. I knew Rosette would figure it out without having to have the whole story laid out for her. She always was able to see things that others did not. Great job on keeping her to character from the anime/manga. Can't wait to see more! ~MRA |
| MercedesRavenAngelous 2008-04-26 ch 19, | abuseWell, that makes things a little better. Now that Joshua at least overheard the conversation between Genai and Aion about Chrono, maybe he will at least pass the word on to Rosette and Azmaria, even if he doesn't understand it himself. Then whether Chrono wants them to know or not, Rosette will figure it out and put an end to the situation... Greatly written, can't wait to see more, and keep up the good work. I hope everything works out for you and you catch up on some sleep! ~MRA |
| MisoGirl 2008-04-23 ch 19, | abuse. . . this is turning out to be a drama! |
| chie 2008-04-23 ch 19, anon. | abusehey..now im so excited! i wonder what'll happen next! oh yeah..hope ur doing fien..u seemed so pressured and stressed out...rest if u can..'kay? update when u feel like it! :-) ja ne~ |
| snekochan 2008-04-23 ch 19, | abuseDum dum dum! And we build towards a climax at the party? Or not. There will certainly be a lot of happenings at the party. The question is...where will they all stand when the party's over? |
| pickle 2008-04-20 ch 18, anon. | abuseit is so awesome! Are you sure you're a guy?! This is the best fanfiction made by a guy! Please update soon too or I will DIE! |