 cullenrox1901 2009-10-14 . chapter 3MIOAR!
THIS IS SO GOOD! |
 Mark the fox 2009-03-18 . chapter 1I know i've read this before to the point of an Eggman attack, then i forgot about it. Looking back at the beginning, i gotta think 'what the hell'. I really gotta say, parents beating on their own offspring for THEIR mistakes is unforgivable in all respects. Where's Station Square CPS (Child Protection Services) when this is happening?
oh well, better that he escapes and finds Sonic before anything else happened. |
 HuMaN-EaTiNg-PaNdA -HEP- 2008-02-21 . chapter 3hey this was really good great job on the story
-HEP- |
 Tutis 75 2008-02-15 . chapter 3Great story. I like how you show the characters. Please update soon. |
 Ricky 2008-01-12 . chapter 3 This is an interesting story, I really like it. I hope that you continue this story soon. |
 DC111 2007-12-02 . chapter 3Aw, this story is really cute so far. I like it. One thing, though: try not to overuse punctuation. For example, you don't need twenty exclamation marks every time someone's excited.
Good job, though! I do love Sonic and Tails stories - they're my favorite characters. Update soon! |
 Storm Uchiha 2007-11-21 . chapter 3Cool story! |
 Nintendo Mania 2007-11-21 . chapter 3Alright! You updated! I'm glad to see it return, and want to see more soon. |
 FlanoirBunniex3 2007-11-21 . chapter 3omg i just realized ur story is kinda like mine O.O
well...like...Tails being abused and sonic calling him little brother is wat basically the same on mine, but our story is TOTALLY different.
Urs is so much better though...And longer lol. Update soon =D |
 ladyamalphia 2007-11-21 . chapter 3Aww I like it. Mind your ellipsis' though... Keep them to three dots, rather than just ... or whatever :) Another thing I didn;t quite get was how Sonic and Amy were married, but they only just met Tails. Good job, though!
--LA |
 Kylefan1990 2007-11-16 . chapter 2Please for the love of god continue this story. I want to know what happens. |
 ShadowlovesRouge 2007-11-09 . chapter 1Please PLEASE contunie! |
 Nintendo Mania 2007-11-04 . chapter 2Wow, what a begin this story had. Real startled me, but I'm interested in reading more. |
 fuck you fanfiction112 2007-10-29 . chapter 2O...I like this alot!!
Me so faving!!
:D
Later, Kitsune!!
-Darkness. |
 FlanoirBunniex3 2007-10-26 . chapter 2u like honestly need to continue this soon :] |