THis sounds great! i cant wait till you write more

Evilpaw...?

Tell me there's not actually going to be a cat named Evilpaw.

hmm... sounds intresting. Although, in your authors notes you called the evil cat "Evilpaw" and in ur story u call him "Darkkit" little confusion, sorry

I think it dounds like this story will be good! but yeah, maybe you shouldn't centre it. There isn't alot of detail yet, but I am guessing it is just because it's a prologue. Can't wait for the next Chapter!!

I like it! Just try not to center the whole story.

This is good I like it!