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| Hmfsoccer 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseTHis sounds great! i cant wait till you write more |
| Tripfeldthemystic 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseEvilpaw...? Tell me there's not actually going to be a cat named Evilpaw. |
| CinderDreams 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abusehmm... sounds intresting. Although, in your authors notes you called the evil cat "Evilpaw" and in ur story u call him "Darkkit" little confusion, sorry |
| Grayfrost 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI think it dounds like this story will be good! but yeah, maybe you shouldn't centre it. There isn't alot of detail yet, but I am guessing it is just because it's a prologue. Can't wait for the next Chapter!! |
| Caged Bird in Demon Arms 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI like it! Just try not to center the whole story. |
| Bdrrrrr33 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is good I like it! |