This is probably my favorite story. I reread it ALL the time:)

thats pretty cool

That was good... really good! Hell, it was great. I loved the entire thing. The banter, the drunkeness (if that is even a word), the kisses, the akwardness... all of it! GREAT GREAT GREAT!

Wow. The new style definitely worked. I totally loved it.

I haven't been around tate fanfics for a while, because I'm not really into the show anymore, and I couldn't find one decent tate fanfic to read, but I was browsing today and found that you'd written anew one and I couldn't resist.

Beautifully written, just the right amount of angst and a fabulous idea. Great work

This story is so captivating. It just completely drew me in... it was almost poetic the way you captured their "dance". Amazing!

Wow.
This was amazing. And I'm not saying this just cause I'm your friend.
This was incredible.
It had so many emotions to it, so many beautiful moments. You captured the characters perfectly and I love how you wrote Kate.
The 'hug it out' bit made me laugh.
The song, geez, it just fit so well.
I love the ending, it was so, idk, sad i guess. Like, things have changed, but will never be. And I think that's beautiful in a way. It's real. Cause as much as we want them together, this is probably the more realistic outcome.
then again, maybe i'm reading too much into this.
Anyway, alli, wow. For both writing (!) and for the amazing-ness and honesty of this fic.
Well done.

very poetic in a non-poemy sort of way. i like it. exept that tony and kate cant carry on their relationship

Wow! That is pure genious! I love it!

This was PERFECT! So perfect that I'm tempted to beg for more...but I won't. LoL! I know better... :-p




Tateness is beautiful...such a beautiful relationship. I can't believe they killed her character off. They should've just transferred her or something; that way there would've been a chance for her to come back if she wished. LOL! I know...I live in a fantasy world where I solve everyone's situations.





LOVED IT! Hope you write another soon!!


~mandi *_*

Yaay! New fresh Tate :) Me like. Good job, different style but it was good :)

aww of course its allowed to grow further! love it
abbylover

love it. absolutely love it.
i love your writing style, its different.
the idea, absolutely brilliant !

So much for thinking your new style wouldn't work. It is a rare thing to get a fanfic that is that smart, that clever, and so believable. Youy really, really got inside Kate and Tony's heads, and I am so impressed by the abstract way this was written. I liked how the two of them were arguing, particularly the 'you see her get her angry, then confused, then angry again' because that is EXACTLY what Tony and Kate's banter was like. Deep, smart, original, this ticks all the boxes. Keep up the brilliant work!

(I apologise for this being so long...)

Hmm, I went and found this song on iTunes. Fits well. =)

Love the second person perspective, especially because you do it so well.

Thumbs up!