Reviews for Written in Sand

Reviews For: Written in Sand

Vook 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseOh sweet! Something new from you! Um, the ending to this was a bit weird. Kind of like hitting a brick wall. I was actually laughing throughout most of this until I got to the end. You said you don't write much angst, which I can understand. I think I'll just think of this as another one of your wry little humor pieces. That line about "the good stuff is for celebrations and the bad stuff is for emergencies" was just great. I myself know how that feels now too. XD I don't typically like yaoi pieces (in fact most of them just make me sick) but I did enjoy this.
Timothy the paperclip 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abusetouching, very touching. But I really couldn't see Jeff with the doctor. But I'm a fan of Karen Femmslash, but only with Mary. But this story is very beauitful.
Azuru 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseWhere on earth did you hear about this pairing? O_o That was just weird. But very, very well done. Completely believable! I love that. I'm not too... fond of the pairing, because I would like to think that Jeff is happy with Sasha and all that, but still, the way this was written makes for a very realistic scenario. Especially his decision to do nothing in the end--unfortunately things go that way a lot. Well, I applaud you on a fic well done!
MyShadowsThorn 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseI'll also have to say I'm really not a huge fan of a story with two guys getting together but I am a fan of good harvest moon stories and admitedly...this def. falls into that category! :) It is kind of realistic and I can see it actually happening. That's probably what I liked about it the most!
Ekoaleko 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseWow. I'm not normally one for guy-guy (yeah, it's yaoi but I call it guy-guy XD) but you just make it flow so well. For a married man who has been caught half-sexing the local doctor and being walked in on by his only daughter, you sure make Jeff seem innocent. I love Karen's comeback and her crude remarks... and I know the ending isn't particularly jolly, but I love how they all stick together dementedly as a family. It's adorable.
Ferocious Death-Kappa 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseWell, this certainly is an interesting idea. Nice that there's no easy way out, no quick-fix, as seems to be the norm. I mean, I'm all fror happy endings, but in this case, it'd be way too unrealistic, so... it turned out well. Why is it that the doctor makes for such easy potential for dirty affair pairings yet he gets so few?

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