Kyaah!! So sweet!! I'd love to read a sequel to this...it's really too bad it doesn't have one...but it's not to late to write it, hehehe

Loved reading this. Keep it up. Your works are really good.

cute! so fucking adorable! please excuse me while i fangirl. . .

Omg, that was made of effing WIN! I loved every word of it! It made me laugh all the way, but my favourite part was the part where inner Sakura squealed over oh-so-smexy Deidara and how Sakura was in denial of it all. XD

DeiSaku bath time crack FTW!

truly beautiful, you write quite well

This was so cute i love it :)

Niice :)
Really good, but short D: xDD
Nopi, was that good :3

More chapters please!

Very cute though!

rate 10!

-squeal-Cute! Love it. Treason is such a turn on! XD

That's why I love crack pairings so much!

OMG, you are great. Ma cheri you have talent, Merci for sharing it with us.

Aw! Cute! DeiSaku beats all, yeah. Keep writing!

Loved this story! Good, *clean* fun with the sexy artist & mednin!

Sarah: *imagines a naked Deidara* *swoons*

Cute. Dei-kun was pretty in character.

whoah...XD sequel dude i love it! XD

Ah! This one-shot is soo cute. It's short, it's simple, and it has everything. It really shows that you were inspired by Fallacy and RikiTikiTavi since you caught their style really well.