wow, this is...an interesting take on a scene/situation that I feel has been done to death. Its thoroughly creepy as well, don't get me wrong, but wow. You totally brought the characters to life! Awesome job.

Everybody wants Integra. Thanks for confirming that.

I'm in love. I think the Major is a romantic. And I think his first description of Integra is quite... um... right :P

I am not normally a MxI fan, but I really liked this story. Alucard and Major fighting for Integra gave a new way of thinking about Hellsing for me. Keep up the awesome work! ::hug::

Well, i must say this was amusing. I rather liked reading it, remember reading this in the Hellsing manga. But i think i like this better, it's far more detailed. Like i said, i rather enjoyed this oneshot... it is very amusing to read

DuchessRaven,
You twisted devil. I knew there was a good reason I put you under my Favorites. You are smokin' good! Yummy! Again and again I bow down before your genuis. I must say that this was simply wonderful.

Most of the time when authors take a scene from the manga and add more, they totally suck. Sometimes it's like they just copy all the lines down and added a few adjectives, thoughts and some descriptive word--boil it in a spot and there you are. Yuck. You, however have not done this. Bravo.

I always figured that the Major was a bit of a pervent. Anyways if you if about it, Integra is quite the "woman's man," I mena hell, she got men line up for her--the Major, Alucard of course and Maxwell. I thought that the one line was clever, "It was too bad, the Major already knew that Integra Hellsing was easily out of this pup's league." Nice. Burn, Enrico. This reminds me of something. There's this one fanart on where like in Vol 4 the 3 powers are in the Conference room and Integra asks, "What is your goal?" After a moment the Major confesses, "Whoever wins this war claims Integra's virginity." (Not bad. I'm in!) Then for the humor Alucard and Maxwell raise up a hand and say together, "Then what a glorious war we shall rage." And of course Integra is very upset.

Regardless, nice job.

As much as the thought of MxI disgust me.. this was very well done. As always, kudos :)

I could so see this happening without Integra's knowledge. I always did see the Major as a type of prevert who may have the hots for Integra

Great Fic! How do you keep coming up with these awesome one-shots.

Quite a sexy, charming perspective on the Major. It may not be really him, but yes, it's nice to think of it that way sometimes.
^^ cheers

Nice story. I also like the fascination of the Major with Integra. I liked how you wrote the piece.

Konnichiwa / Konbanwa!

I have to say that I am a huge fan of your stories. And the reason behind that is because it is like you have truly studied Hirano's characters. When I read your stories, it is as though the characters have been taken from the books and put into your stories. I don't mean to say that you have Hirano's work down 100%, but it is the closest I have come across ever. Sadly, this has allowed me to become highly picky of reading the Hellsing stories of others on or any other fan-fiction site. You take the Hellsing universe , and try to make the stories as realistic as possible in that world. Also, you really get into the characters thoughts and express them very well, and that is what I enjoy the most, and to prove to you how much I enjoy your work, I have a 2GB flash drive that I take to work, and ALL of your main stories, even some of the one-shots are saved to my flash drive, so that I can read your stories at work during my pass times. I apologize, for not showing my appreciation of your work by reviewing all of the pieces you have written. I appreciate you for sharing you creations. Since I am not huge on writing myself, I am sorry that I cannot write a review with a professional writer's-critique. The only thing I can give in that area is to be sure to clean up your grammar errors, but they ARE NOT severe to the point where it degrades the quality of your story. You give wonderful descriptions that allows me to have a picture in my mind as I am reading, which I feel is very important. The creativity of the Major's thoughts had me like: 'Wow, this is insane.' But that's great because the Major is insane. You delved into his mind and pulled out his sick thoughts, which were very convincing as though the scene was a part of the original manga. What a sick bastard of a heel the Major is, which is good for contrast of the good guy. Anyway, this one-shot truly prompted me to write this review... if it can be called that, lol. Lastly, my favorite stories of yours is the whole The Way To An Heir saga (the sequel & Happily Ever After). I think your creativity within the saga is wonderful. I read the story because a male-pregnancy with Alucard was too rich to pass up, but it is so believable in the Hellsing world because of how the story has been structured. Once again, thank you, and keep up the good work! ^_^

Nice. Very nice.

there are very few Major stories.

this one i truly enjoyed.

Wow. I just watched the Dub Version of Ova I that was released, and being able to hear that REALLY well done accent in my head while reading this was just a superb addition! Thank you so much for writing this! His insane thoughts of going to war to win Integral (as well as for other non-reasons) is just fabulous! I so enjoy your stories! :D