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| Silver lugia 2008-03-18 ch 11, anon. | abusevery good *claps* before Amber and Shiloh were "unmasked" I thought they might be desendents of the stormhawks, I twas wrong again though XD, update soon please :) |
| Nikkitty101 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abusethis is good! keep on going! |
| Lace Agate 2008-01-26 ch 11, | abuseAction packed! Good job and please update ASAP!! ^.^ |
| catmaster101 2008-01-25 ch 11, anon. | abusei have to admit this is one of the best fanfics i've read in a long time please update soon i'm biting my nails here well almost. |
| Lace Agate 2007-12-21 ch 10, | abuseThis has gotten confusin' for me. But otherwise it is really good!! UPDATE ASAP!! ^.^ |
| Lace Agate 2007-12-10 ch 9, | abuseDon't get me wrong, I like Aerrow, but it doesn't mean I'll kill you because you injured him, jeez. Well, that was an interesting chappie. I like Shiloh and Amber. Good job and please UPDATE ASAP!! ^.^ |
| Lace Agate 2007-11-28 ch 8, | abusePoor Aerrow! BAD future Serenity! Hm, I liked this chappie though! Good job and update ASAP! (I read both chapters 7&8, they were both really good). ^.^ |
| zx319 2007-11-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseThat was a really action packed chapter. The only bad thing in my opinion was that Master cyclonis would'nt get distracted that easily. Anyway, please continue! |
| Lace Agate 2007-11-25 ch 6, | abuseHm, I was slightly lost, but that was a good chapter. Good job and update asap because I want to know what happens next to these people and the Storm Hawks. ^.^ |
| Lace Agate 2007-11-13 ch 5, | abuseI'm confused... well, anyway, update! |
| Lace Agate 2007-11-13 ch 4, | abuseI am slightly confused. What just happened? Well, anyways, good job and update soon!! ^.^ |
| Lace Agate 2007-10-21 ch 3, | abuseHuh? I'm sorry, I am confused. Who is Narcissa? What had this to do with anything? Who in the world is the hooded figure? *sigh* Sorry... I really liked this chapter so that means that you must continue! And I need to find out what just happened here. *another sigh* UPDATE! ^.^ |
| Lace Agate 2007-10-18 ch 2, | abuseI like it, some advise though. I like longer chapters. Yours are so short. UPDATE soon! ^.^ |
| Lace Agate 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI think it's an interesting sequel. But, I am so confused, what was the black hole with red lightning? Good job and update. ^.^ |
| SakariWolfe 2007-10-17 ch 1, | abuseheh, woa. yah, just a lil dramatic... |