That was brillant!! i love the ending =) but i thought sokka was 15? O__O

how cute! i loved it!

well i liked it... i think you should continue 1. because it was good, and 2 i didn't like the ending ^_^ what does aang and katara say? that would be interesting
anyways..
thats about it

Awe this is so cute! I also support Tokka! They're adorable together!
"That’s ridiculous poodle-monkeys are wayy prettier than you! Hell, they are almost as handsome as me!" This made me laugh so hard!
Unfortunately, I don't live in the UK :( I'm stuck in America, but I've seen the avatar and the firelord on youtube. I heard the puppeteer was scary! I want to see it so bad!! *sighs* At least your friend will be posting them on youtube! ^.^
Loved the story! Keep it up!

that is a very good story you should keep writing it :)

Awesome! (Sokka's 15 though) PLEASE GO ON!

LOL. Sokka is nice to Toph. This is kinda funny, 'cause Sokka made the mistake of telling Toph he liked her. XD And I liked how you had Toph say what Sokka's heart was saying. Very fluffy! yum.

aww! thats so cute i just got my daily dose of tokka fluff awsome story

Aw!

i thought it was good i hope you continue it! ^_^

It was very fluffy, which I love very much. Romance is definately my favorite type of genre. ;-)

However, let me just point out a couple of things - this fic was a little too forward. Well, you probably shouldn't have quoted part of the conversation by Toph and Katara in the series.

Sokka AND Toph seemed OOC too. Sokka wouldn't have just come out and said, "Oh, you're pretty." He might've hinted around a little that she wasn't ugly; but I think it was a little straight forward for him. Especially (SPOILER) when he kissed her at the end. He really wouldn't have done that. The girl would've had to make the first move with him.

Toph on the other hand, when Sokka said he was going to go, she wouldn't have stopped him. She would've just been like, "Night, Snoozles." and that's it. That was too forward for her too ,I think.

You just really have to be careful with the whole TophxSokka pairing. Because both of them are "slow", meaning it takes a while for them to warm up to people and admit their feelings. Especially, since you're writing a oneshot. With the couple you used, it definately should have been longer. Either that, or you probably should have taken out the kiss at the end. Like I said, they're a little "slow" and very stuborn. This story could've, easily, been a thousand or two thousand words. With both of their fun personalities and jokes, you could have played around with them a little, and just let the romance slowly come out.

Hopefully, you'll take this advice when writing your next TophxSokka story. ;-) Anyways...

~Signed,

Kish's Migoto Koneko ♥

lol seriously cute! keep writing, its great!

Isn't Sokka 15? Anyways, it's great! MAKE MORE! PLEASE?!?? It makes me feel all warm inside. Great Job!

i really like it, the scens were a little confusing but i did like it. alot of stuff was unexpected u should really continue

there is a review restriction?