u over looked 1 big deatail in your story 'a fairy can not enter a human's building unless invited to enter or the fairy will throw up and have nawsia.' it is in the BOOK and in the AF series many times.

awesome

grr... y'know, grub isnt' that stupid. by the way, couldn't Foaly just lip through the video?

hmm... i wonder how the blue rinse was triggered by that... would there be another blue rinse in there, set off by a different file or something?

i hope not,
brittney

ooh, looking good, please update soon

Great story! Can't wait to read the rest.

Great Story! I'm guessing that this story is almost done, right? If so please write another or a sequel. Your style of writing is just great.

a question, how did holly nd root enter the apartment without being invited? OR did you write an expanation that i missed?

hey i LOVE this story... update! Please
* big puppy dog eyes* I want to play hide the fungus cigar...* laughs menacinly* Anyway, Awesome story!

Savanna

You mimicked Foaly's annoying nature perfectly! Congratulations! :)

So far, your story has been wonderful! I can't wait to finish reading it.

Omg... that took forever to finish, but don't take that as a bad thing!! Your chapters are long, perfect infact. Your characters are a bit ooc, but I think Eoin Colfer would forgive you if you finish this story. Come to think of it, this story is alot like Colfer's books. All this information is presented to you in the beginning and sometime later it comes in handy later, that and it seems like his story is always developing until the very last page when you find out that something hasn't been accomplished, which means the fairy people, and Artemis get to play again.

Question: (I havn't read Root and Growl yet I will though, promise!) This story is taking place right after that one, which means the Lost Coloney hasn't taken place yet right? I do seem to recall something about the Demons and how Hybras left earth and all that jazz. I just wondered if No. 1 was going to show up...

Pen

Ps- (WARNING THIS CONTANS SPOILER FROM THE NEWEST ARTEMIS FOWL BOOK: The Time Paradox)

I don't have any friends that read the Artemis fowl books so since this is my first fowl fic (hey... nice ring to that) after reading that book I'm going to rant.

OMG did you finish that book? OMG Now there's effing TWO Opals. Heh... I bet they tear each other to shreads.. they're so paradoid. but they catch the past opal though, cause remember she bounced out of the room in the past. So they suceed. The whole Artemis/Fairy thing would've never happened too if Artemis hadn't have gone back in time for the lemur, so I guess we should thank opal for that, she did make it so that Artemis should go back in time... but if Artemis hasn't gone back in time then Opal would've had the lemur in the past and the present would be wayy different and we'd have no story... I just find it hilarious that it was Artemis' fault that he started searching for the fairies.

Heh... Sounds like a fun game! *Snicker!* Poor old Julius...

I'm so glad you've updated this. It's one of the most interesting AF stories around. Keep 'em coming please!

I havn't finished the other chapters but, that cruel god of fate Root is referring to is actually an author named JuliennePotato...

Pen

Excellent so far btw!!

you're crazy u know that the story is good but crazy update soon

Great chapter!

Wonderful as always. Especially the opening sequence. I've always liked scenes within scenes.
Two thumbs up!
Alicia