I Loved it! Well done :)

I'm sorry, but that just doesn't seem like Miroku to me. At all.

Your spelling and grammar are good but that isn't enough to save the fic. It's pretentious and overly sappy and I just couldn't like it.

You mentioned that this was written a while ago though, so you've probably improved since then :)

Wow...I have to say, I saw the title, and I IMMEDIATELY thought of the song. I happen to love that song and I thought the tie-in was well done. It was quite and enjoyable read. Good work. I can't wait to read more.

Wow...that was just awesome. I loved the way you presented this writing; the narrative, story-tale style...it was wonderful. You did a magnificent job. I applaud. *clapping*

Please continue with your writing. You're very good at it.

this is a very interesting story. I like Miroku's idea of perfection. It's a state of mind...