The sword was a good one not seen that method used before to change Kagome into a demon, good one, good job.

That was fantastic, really really was. Only thing i didnt like was the way you described thier conversations. I wasnt able to connect to thier feelings because all i read was thier words, not thier body language, how the words effected eachother, etc. Near the end it was just thier conversation and i would have liked you to be more detailed. Maybe some of his words would have brought a tear to her eyes, or her heart beat faster. I think it would have been much better if you had added this elements, it was still really good though. You also didnt use commas and had many run on sentences. So i got lost easily and had to reread alot of your sentences.

I loved this story. It made me cry reading it and the way you presented Sesshomaru and Kagome in this story made the story come to life. Keep going! I love your stories!

Sayonara for now!

oo amazing one shot! I adore it! ^^ It was so deep and meaningful! I can't wait to read the the rest of your stories ^^