Im sorry to say that I dont like your story cuz It makes no sense and yeah

more please I love your writing thank you

You misspelled the word pairings, but I read the fic and I like it.

story getting good please keep updates coming thank you again please faster updates

messed up hook ups... sirius and remus gay...no voldy... I LOVE IT! lol anywayzz, update Rain, I agree with hopping mad that we should give claire Violet Thorpe time to update her stories. once i had to wait three months for a chapter of one of my favorite fanfictions but i knew that the person had a life to live and couldn't always be on the computer so I wasn't as annoyed. You should apologize to her.