so very sweet! :D congrats on a great story!

This is really great. I can actually imagine it playing out that way. Awesome job!

AW! SO CUTE! I love this fic so much! It was really too bad in the series when Eiri left Shuichi there at the park but he did have his reasons. That's why I'm so happy you did this! You made it so in character and made it sweet at the same time and got Eiri's persona going on right. GOOD JOB!

Cute fic. Thank you for the fluff! *squee*

That's how the show should have ended. Great job.

so beautiful.

This was so beautiful *-*

thank you so much for writing it :)

T.T *gush* Such a pretty story! I loved it, it made me whistful, its beautiful

Wow! Really good! You have great grammer and the whole thing runs together really well. Aw, Yuki doesn't want a new pic! Cute!

OH MY GOSH WOW.

THANK YOU -SO- MUCH!

I'm on the other side of my country right now, on an infuriatingly slow hotel computer, and I just randomly thought I'd see what's up at ffnet. "Oh, a new story from Moon-san," I said to myself. "Well, I should definitely read this!"

And when I saw the dedication I was like "...-squeal!-" THANK YOU SOO MUCH! You totally made my day

And I hadn't even gotten to the story yet! It made me squeal even more. It's just so cute and lovely and wonderful! Your writing is so amazing, it seriously is. I don't know how you make it so clear and precise, and yet so full of beautiful details...wah. It's so sparkly. Yes, that's right! Your writing is PIKA-PIKA!

-falls out of hotel spinny chair-

This is so sweet. I love it I love it I love it. You totally made my week ;D Thank you yet again! -glomps- Nya, I'm gonna read it again! -heart-

That was...so, so sweet! It left me with that warm, fuzzy feeling :) Such excellent portrayal of the characters!

Very touching and beautifully written!

This was good! :3

Really nice and cute story, without too much OOC. I really liked it.

Patchan.

*happy sigh* So sweet! I love the way you write these characters-you make them so real.

This was a lovely epilogue to the anime. I always wished they could have done one more track, to show Eiri's homecoming. This was the perfect happily ever after. Beautiful work-keep writing!