Really good!

TT.TT wa so true. If only... if only! gaah Masashi Kishimoto-sama!! Onegai! -sniffle- one day.. one day.

*purrs* this is what i mean. a little awkwardly written, actually, and all the pairings sounded a little fake, as though you were just laying out your favorite couplings, but on the whole, nice.

not very angsty though.

I loved it! It didn't strike me as a fanfic though, it was so very real. I feel that you could have replaced the names of the Naruto characters with ordinary ones and it would have read as an excellent short story.

holy ** never saw Kakashi and Yamato coming

I can picture Sasuke and Naruto's relationship exactly like this. You did an awesome job on this and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! :D

Aw, this was so sweet!I totally loved it!!

i love is story... its so darn sweet in its own little way all i could do after i read it was go 'aw'... this story so perfectly describes naruto and sasuke's relationship

yeah, I think so too and sorry to say this but this fic gave me a idea of a good plot for my next storie(as if I ever finish my stories:P)do you mind?

aw cute! But your right. they're not the ones to be like a normal couple. but its still sweet and cute.

i love your take on the relationship between sasuke and naruto!

Aw, how sweet. Even if it wasn't the usual mushy ** that I like, it was still very nice. I agree that Sasuke and Naruto's relationship would be much more of a rough road then "Oh, sweety, I love you dearly!" but maybe not that rough. Yes, Sasuke would definitely be in a depression due to his brother's death, but I'm sure he would open up a little with Naruto sticking by him through the thick . . . and thicker. They may not be a romantic couple (well they kind of are, the way they're always looking out for each other), but they are most definitely the cutest couple EVER.
Well, I really enjoyed it; you did a great job. Thanks for the good read.

-Paramour

i compleatly agree with what your saying this is more plauseable than the others

oh i so liked that alot

i loved it and i don't think they would act like this when their togrther i think it would be a lil different but i don't know how yet but it really was a good one can't wait till read more and i especially can't wait for next chapter of yuor cute when you scream