Yes, like a lot of people said; it's pretty cute. But I don't think how you said 'the blonde' or 'the taller one' was very... I don't know. It just doesn't make sense to me. It's probably because I see it WAY too much in fics.

Please don't think this is a flame, it's not.

wow, this is pretty cute! Would you mind if I drew a comic of this? If I do end up doing it, I'll credit you and have a link with it back to this story! but, that's only if you allow me to. I wanted to ask because this oneshot is short, sweet, and to the point, perfect for a doujinshi however small it may be. :]

it wasnt evry long, but the cuteness makes up for it! ^^ a=nd great writing, i wish i could write like that... :(

Ah! This is so adorable and sad, considering what happens. It's really well written too, you really managed to pack a lot of emotion in without saying too much.

Wow, this is unbelievably cute and tragic, especially knowing how it all ends. But, for that one moment, it mattered and that's more than anyone can ask for. Great job on this.

*squeaks* You know how much I adore this, I just had to say it again. =)

I like it.
:)
It's cute.
It made me smile.