"Complete with freak show and stale popcorn" is a lovely mixed metaphor. Fantastic chapters, both, and I'll poke around to see if you've continued.

"...jab needles into random passersby." love that phrase. I still enjoy your economy of words. I am looking forward to watching this story evolve.

Intense, intense, intense. Great chapter!

Oh, nice angsty chapter, I never did trust Warner either...I knew she was up to no good. I think Diane needs some TLC...anyone, anyone, Jake, Jake... ;)

Very promising start. I always wondered about how fast he recovered in Get Foley. (The smile was understandable - he had his arm around a very pretty girl ;D)

Interesting...
I like your take of this episode. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Very nice beginning...and I think this concept makes perfect sense after 'Get Foley'. I hope someone teached him how to "feel" soon...wink wink.