I loved this. It does explain the weirdness of that scene very well. I liked everyone's different reactions to their grief. It was very believable. :)

Oh man.. I finally got the netflix disk for Sunday, and bout cried my eyes out. Intellectually, I'd caught spoilers months ago (I have no cable, so I've had to wait for the dvds) but I still was not prepared for Carson to go!

This is a brilliantly done fic as far as the truth to grief and the grieving process. I was actually ** that the next episode after Sunday, everything was immediately business as normal again.. so this was actually a good one for me to read.. *hug*

You made me believe.

This is one of my all time favorite stories. I have read it four times in the last few months, and I love it more each time. Thank you.

aww wow. you made me cry. poor rodney. just wish there was a sequal to this!!?

This was an enthralling story. I got into as deeply as Rodney got into the device. Fascinating from beginning to end. The team needs to stick together. I loved the floating analogy. It fit perfectly.

That was so GOOD! I practically cried when Sheppard leaned against Rodney. Their friendship is so special!

Excellent! Made me want to cry...

Nice way to put it. Works.

Beautifully done. Made me want to cry all over again. I'm so glad to see someone deal realistically with their grief, since the show just swept it under the rug of their giant mistake (bitter, no, I'm not bitter).

So sad and believable. Very nice.

Oh...really well done and inspired.

Damn, Sholio, this was hard to read. You played out their grief so well, so sharply, it was hard not to want to get up and walk away, get some air. It was that affecting. I think the first scene when Rodney first puts the device on, then takes it off, and puts it on again...that whole scene was just amazing. And so very real. Amazing job, as always.

That was beautiful *sob*. Exceptional writing with some truly touching moments, you really nailed John and Rodney’s characters. I need more tissue *sniff*…

Wonderfully written, as usual. It was a pleasure to read (which sounds odd, since the story is filled with angst, but it was such brilliantly conveyed angst that I enjoyed reading it!)