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Karasu Kagami
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
(laughs)
"They do my laundry"!?
Oh Primus thats good!
"Hey! No fair! He got to keep him! If he gets his then I get mine!”
Wow, ive got no idea where you got this but cudos-i cant stop smiling!
*fav*

-Karasu
Please Note
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
“They do my laundry!”

Oh my. That was hilarious. Absolutely genius. I wish I could come up with something like this. Even though this was a humor-centered fic, the tension at the beginning was palpable and well-written. The subsequent change to bewilderment and hilarity was adequately paced as well. Ha! I can picture Starscream still receiving the blame for this situation although all of the Decepticons were in the wrong.
HIGH and MIGHTY COLOR
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
That was too brilliant! It was the last thing I was expecting, but so amazingly funny I nearly died! Why can I picture Optimus saying "They do my laundry!" so perfectly? This entire thing was simply brilliant, I can't even express how happy it made me. Bravo, you just made my day.
Vaeru
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
Honey, you win. ;3 Pure and simple.
CuriousDreamWeaver
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
LOL I loved it! It was a wonderfully interesting and amusing way to rescue hostages from Megatron! LOL Well done.
^_~
CDW
Readasaur
2008-04-02 . chapter 1
And at last the truth about Bumblebee and Spike's relationship comes out! ^__^
A cute story, I enjoyed it!
Tatsumaki-sama
2008-01-24 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! That was a brilliant plan from Bumblebee. Love how all the Autobots all clamoring to get their "slaves".

//“What could you possibly need five for!?”

Optimus turned quickly over his shoulder. “They do my laundry!”//

Do Autobots even have laundry? LOL! Great job!
Truth of Barricade
2007-10-22 . chapter 1
I burst out laughing and started crying after I read this. That would have been okay if I wasn't at work at the time. Instead I got weird looks and I have a meeting with my boss now about spending company time or something.

*shurgs* It was worth it. Nice story. I haven't laughed that hard in awhile and I have read some pretty funny stuff. You have my awe.
Cman710
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Nice, that was funny at how they did that... I found it original and very well written, good job!
flamingmarsh
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
this was great! If I only been there to see the look on Megatron's face!
Kiseki no Tenshi
2007-10-18 . chapter 1
LOL! ^_^ Great story!!
Jillian Jiggs
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
I can't stop laughing! My face hurts from smiling!! That was great!
Cougar66
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
Bwuahaha! "They do my laundry!"

-doubles over with silent laughter-

Oh my. I haven't had such a good laugh in a while! I adore your new twist on the entire "decepticons capture humans and autobots get said humans back" plot. Very refreshing change of pace!

Excellent job!
Death Scribe
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
Darr. But Autobots don't wear clothes...

Hah. Funniest thing I've read all day. Sneaky Autobots :D
Milk
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
LMAO!

"What laundry?" should be their proper response to that! Well done. This fic had me laughing out loud. ;)
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