 Karasu Kagami 2009-07-20 . chapter 1(laughs)
"They do my laundry"!?
Oh Primus thats good!
"Hey! No fair! He got to keep him! If he gets his then I get mine!”
Wow, ive got no idea where you got this but cudos-i cant stop smiling!
*fav*
-Karasu |
 Please Note 2009-07-17 . chapter 1“They do my laundry!”
Oh my. That was hilarious. Absolutely genius. I wish I could come up with something like this. Even though this was a humor-centered fic, the tension at the beginning was palpable and well-written. The subsequent change to bewilderment and hilarity was adequately paced as well. Ha! I can picture Starscream still receiving the blame for this situation although all of the Decepticons were in the wrong. |
 HIGH and MIGHTY COLOR 2009-07-17 . chapter 1That was too brilliant! It was the last thing I was expecting, but so amazingly funny I nearly died! Why can I picture Optimus saying "They do my laundry!" so perfectly? This entire thing was simply brilliant, I can't even express how happy it made me. Bravo, you just made my day. |
 Vaeru 2009-01-05 . chapter 1Honey, you win. ;3 Pure and simple. |
 CuriousDreamWeaver 2008-11-15 . chapter 1LOL I loved it! It was a wonderfully interesting and amusing way to rescue hostages from Megatron! LOL Well done.
^_~
CDW |
 Readasaur 2008-04-02 . chapter 1And at last the truth about Bumblebee and Spike's relationship comes out! ^__^
A cute story, I enjoyed it! |
 Tatsumaki-sama 2008-01-24 . chapter 1Hahahaha! That was a brilliant plan from Bumblebee. Love how all the Autobots all clamoring to get their "slaves".
//“What could you possibly need five for!?”
Optimus turned quickly over his shoulder. “They do my laundry!”//
Do Autobots even have laundry? LOL! Great job! |
 Truth of Barricade 2007-10-22 . chapter 1I burst out laughing and started crying after I read this. That would have been okay if I wasn't at work at the time. Instead I got weird looks and I have a meeting with my boss now about spending company time or something.
*shurgs* It was worth it. Nice story. I haven't laughed that hard in awhile and I have read some pretty funny stuff. You have my awe. |
 Cman710 2007-10-18 . chapter 1Nice, that was funny at how they did that... I found it original and very well written, good job! |
 flamingmarsh 2007-10-18 . chapter 1this was great! If I only been there to see the look on Megatron's face! |
 Kiseki no Tenshi 2007-10-18 . chapter 1LOL! ^_^ Great story!! |
 Jillian Jiggs 2007-10-17 . chapter 1I can't stop laughing! My face hurts from smiling!! That was great! |
 Cougar66 2007-10-17 . chapter 1Bwuahaha! "They do my laundry!"
-doubles over with silent laughter-
Oh my. I haven't had such a good laugh in a while! I adore your new twist on the entire "decepticons capture humans and autobots get said humans back" plot. Very refreshing change of pace!
Excellent job! |
 Death Scribe 2007-10-17 . chapter 1Darr. But Autobots don't wear clothes...
Hah. Funniest thing I've read all day. Sneaky Autobots :D |
 Milk 2007-10-17 . chapter 1 LMAO!
"What laundry?" should be their proper response to that! Well done. This fic had me laughing out loud. ;) |