Oh, that's beautiful. So beautiful...

it was cute! i was scared at first because it was an angst story and i don't like sad stories... but this one was good! wasn't really sad at all! it was calming. great job!

It's nice, but something's missing, and i wouldn't tell you what it's for you to find out. Hope that you could do better next time around.

aw,, that is so sweet!.. i really like it!,, i hope you'll make more.. Even though it's not detailed much, you can understand the story!.. you're so good at it.. ^^