This was a great story love it!

Aww.. I love the ending to this story! Thank you for the brilliant writing. The angst and love along the way was all worth it in the end.
I was very glad that Kate told Jack the truth about who Olivia's father was, before it was too late. You've written Tay well also, he's a great guy.
Thank you for the wonderful story! Can't wait for more future new stories.

Oh what a sweet ending. I really loved this story and looked forward to all the updates - I'll be sad to see it go. But I love that they are a happy family on the brink of expanding. And love how thrilled Olivia was to have her daddy in her life.

I hope you'll write more stories soon. I really like your writing style and your creativity.

It's really amazing story. You made wonderfull happy end. When I read, that this chapter is one year later (and ten days), I expected, that Kate is pregnant. Jack went back to his job and Kate study. It's lovely ending. :-)

aww sweet ending, as it should be. thanx for this wonderful story. cant wait for your next fic. thanx!!

Ella

It was wonderful, thanks for another great story :)

Cute epilogue. I knew Kate was going to say that too, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It was just the icing on the cake. It's nice that Jack gets to be involved this time -- I can't imagine how exciting that would be for him. For both of them. I liked the last paragraph too, about fate. I've always thought that if he and Kate got together, Jack's perspective on that and destiny would change.

I'm curious about what happened to Tay and Isabelle too. I hope Isabelle married someone really nasty and became the trophy wife she was bred for! Or better -- married someone poor!

This was a fun ride -- the perfect romantic comedy set up. (I noticed that you even had the "break up"/"run to the train station", or in this case, airport). It's just shame Tay was so nice. We didn't get to see him and Jack beat each other up in front of the relatives and cause a scene at the rehearsal dinner, although I imagine their relationship will never be quite the same. Especially if Tay is forced to see Jack with what was almost his family at future reunions.

Can't wait to see what you have planned next. ;)

Aw, that was such a great ending! Although...I was kind of expecting that Kate would say that. I'm wondering how Kate goes to uni in NY, when they live in Chicago, surely that's a big commute? Very cute ending. I'm kind of sad to see it finish though. :(

"Jack quit his job, broke off ties with his family, packed up everything he owned, and moved to Chicago to be with Kate. He proposed right away wanting her to realize that he wanted nothing more then to spend the rest of his life with Kate and Olivia. Olivia and Jack’s bond was a strong as imaginable. Olivia was daddy’s little girl; anyone could see it by just looking at them together. Kate got butterflies every time she realized that Jack had chosen her, she was with Jack. Her soul mate, her best friend, he was hers." - that was so sweet!

“Because in the end,” Jack said looking over at Kate. Their eyes met and she smiled at him. His heart melted like it did every time. “Fate… determines what your life is going to be like… and in the case of this family, we have very good luck with fate.” - yep, that's true!

this was a wonderful fanfic. it's so great to see that jack and kate have finally got together. but, what happened to tay? where is he? it would have been nice to see what he was up to too but nevertheless, the most important couple in here was jack and kate from the beginning so it's good to see them together. :)
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aw finally their together yay. thanx for this sweet chapter.

Ella

They are finally together, yupi. I can't wait forward Livvy's reaction, when she'll see Jack.

Aw...that was such a sweet chapter. I love the idea of Jack showing up on the beach and telling Kate what he did. And I love the idea that he thought enough to bring along the stethascope for Olivia. (such a daddy move).

Now that they're back on track I can't wait for them to tell Livvy everything and see her reaction.

YAY! *grins that special, magical Jater grin that only your fics bring* God, I love how you write Jate. This is just fantastic, I'm even debating whether or not I like this more than Always and Forever...hmm...*favourites it, just in case she hasn't already*. I'm so glad he found her! And that she's agreed to stop running, I'd stop running for Jack too. God, this hiatus is driving me crazy, and I want to write so badly but I'm all...empty. Grr. Your fics keep me going though, they're the sunshine, in an otherwise, virtually Jateish sky. Where is the Jate?

Anyways, great update, it's nice that she went to visit Claire. I hope they really do get their happy ever after. :D I'm sure they will, you won't deny them that.

aww, that was lovely! i'm so glad that they've finally got together... the next chapter will be with olivia, right? update please!
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YAY! He's going after them! *imagines hearing 'Ain't No Mountain High Enough'* Oh, I'm very excited to see what happens next. I have to admit that I did expect him to be very **, I was also half expecting an 'I know'. Keep up the awesome work, can't wait for the next update!