I really liked this story, Especially because you made it classy, even though there could have been more details... :)
It was short and sweet. Great job.

Good story! I like the idea of these two in a relationship! Its interesting!

Oh my god. That was really good. You should really make another chapter to it. Like showing how Vash reacts to it or something. I don't know. It just doesn't feel like it's finished yet. But other than that it's really well written. ^^

I don't know how you manage to give Knives a totally awesome personality in this story!
I love it when you picture him this way! all of this was purely genious!

write more of the pairing please, you rock!

I've actually read this before and all i can say it that it exceeds expectations! Your a lovely writter and it is VERY hard to find even tolerable stories to read in this particular area of fanfiction as it is, so to find something that excells when others bearly make the cut is an absoulte joy. Thank you and i hope to read more from you.

This is the 5th time I have read this and I can't get tire of this story XD I just love the way you write. The way you make Knives and Meryl act is great,they are really believable. I simply love your work!

Good story you should continue it.

oh i love the knives*myrle stories yes i do

Great story

Wow... and usually I don't care for Knives x Meryl stuff... but this was really good! Loved it! ^_^

~Jay~ (_() Marshmellow.

Hey, can you please please please please update you story, "To Change You"? It's terribley well done, and I've been waiting so long for you to continue it...I'm hooked!
--Ible Gible

All I can say is WOW.

Firstly, I'd like to make something clear. I only read yaoi. Wait, let me correct that, I only read yaoi, until now.

I've always liked Trigun, the anime, and Meryl was always my favorite character. Knives, not so much. But over time, my tastes have changed ^^

I love this. The pairing is now my favorite pairing of all time. I'm 20, so I think its OK for to visit your site and read the mature-rated version of the stories ^^

Anyhow, I absolutely love this story!! I actually stayed up until about...*blushes* 4am, reading several of the stories. The down side of that is that I couldn't review at the time, but I came back to review now ^^

Great work, you're an awesome author, too!!

Oh, I like this pairing! I never would have though of it but you actually made it work =D Good job!

Wow o wow! This is so good H.! I am glad that I got to read the two chapters together, it is so awesome! I love (LOVE) your writing skills. People who write like you are what makes reading fanfics fun and enjoyable. Incredible, just wonderful, *hugs fic to chest*. You are THE BEST at writing Knives and Meryl, bar none! Oh yea!
*glowing*

Wow, there was a lot of heat in your fic. While it's probably a stretch to see Knives like that, it was very enjoyable to read nonetheless!