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| Faba 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI'm kind of confused about the last part, but maybe I'm just being oblivious... Anyways... I just loved it. Very orgional. There were just a few errors in the beginning, but it was still wonderful... in an angsty sort of way... ;__; |
| Curlycurlz 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseVery good. I like the addition of the toad-man. And the last line is beautiful. |
| Zarrian 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseGood Job! |