You are a really talented writer. The story is so sad but the songs for chapter titles and the small fragments of the songs really work. Every chapter I played the song that was at the begining of the chapter while I read it. It really brought out the emotion. This is truly awesome!

ok!

Awesome job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

update...please :-D ::gets down on hands and knees:: please please please~!

Aw! Thanks for the shout-out! You couldn't be nicer.
I LOVED this chapter. Derek was really sweet to Nora and the whole photostrip idea was so cute. I'm happy for the update =}

I loved it! Try and make a twist and have casey come back to life. Think of how happy Derek would be about that! Please update soon!

Love it! You really captured emotions well.

my heart actually feels heavy, such a heart wrenching story, pleez update when you can.

Hey! It's Amanda. I'm really glad I read this! The third chapter was so good especially. Your a really good writter!

u should've made it a promise ring, that's more believable. a promise ring basically says engagement, but your young

tears are threatening to fall...there's just no way for a happy ending in a story like this.

well i guess casey's the one that dies...how utterly depressing. reminds me of a country song actually

its so sad. but good.

woah this is really good! keep it up! update soon, i love it.

Watched the video and that was SAD,almost made me cry. Now that I know this story is based on that I will have to continue to read it. Oh where did that semi come from in the vid?