Hmm, thought I'd already reviewed this chapter...well, as with all your other works, this very entertaining. I look forward to the off chance it's updated.

This really is a fascinating fanfic...I think it's less the topic and more the atmosphere. Cloud's uncertainty in himself bleeds into the world itself, making it less real and more fantastical.

Heya, Icor! Aren't you updating this? The wait is killing me, really want to know what Aerith says when she finds out. And the promised fluff!! *sends muses*

Gah I can't believe I just found this. It's amazing, I was on the verge of tears the whole of the second chapter. Please continue this, k? I'd be miserable if you don't! Poor Cloud! I get the feeling you'll have to send him back in the end, but please don't... My poor little heart would be ripped to shreds, like when Cloud was checking his phone. Or at least send her back with him? *puppy dog eyes* Cloud, just stay here with the cold water and the bland food, okay? T__T

This is cool. It is in fact implied that he does get back.
Hooray for Clorith!

I love your works. So much. And this story is no exception. Please update soon.

of all the things wonderful about this fic (and i assure you, there are a lot), my favourite aspect of it is how you've paced the story and cloud's relationships in such a realistic light. aerith and cloud aren't just automatically in love after first sight; their characters and dynamic are progressing at a proper rate, the rate anyone would given the situation. he doesn't have all this memories flooding back at him whenever he's with aerith; they come painstakingly and usually when he's unconscious. and yet, your characterizations of everyone in the phonebook are believable, especially cloud after the point in which he regains that particular memory.

i can't wait to see what happens to cloud and aerith with this new revelation overhead, particularly considering the fact that aerith seems to possibly be remembering something as well. you are an author who is known to reliably complete what they start, so my fear that you will abruptly abandon an amazing story, as other authors have, is definitely assauged by the fact.

abridged version: you = awesomeness.

The 'discarded experiment' bit gave me chills, and I couldn't help but grin at smug ol' Zack...

But, when Cloud found out about her in his world... now that almost got me crying...

Though, it does leave many questions milling around my mind!

I've never played Tactics, but this is still an awesome fic. ^_^ I couldn't stop laughing over Aerith and Cloud getting drunk. XD I'll be looking for more!

I really enjoyed this one. The way you linked his world and memories to what Aerith is saying was great!
Awesome work as usual! xD
~Beeria

I adore how you've made Cloud's thoughts (and first-person narrative :) ) so unique and understandible, especially with the use of stutters and jumbled words to capture the likeness of his thoughts.