one?! one review?! this fic is way too good to only have one review! it's awesome! and you kept them in character too! i can definetly see the characters acting this way. well done!
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na~ay - I have no idea why they're sad and stuff, but I can follow who's talking when and such just fine! I can understand if your friend had trouble following if it was three or more people speaking, but this is like...uber easy to follow : / - so, I dunno what he was talking about.

DON'T CRY CHARACTERS! YOU'lL MAKE FANGIRLS SAD!