Reviews for Kim Possible In Building a stronger future

Reviews For: Kim Possible In Building a stronger future

CajunBear73 2008-07-29 ch 6,	abuseI say Ned can run Bueno Nacho just fine. Ron needs to get his education, alongside Kim, and go to college. As for the Lowardian invasion, it's about to hit the fan at the mall.
Lady Rhetorica 2007-12-03 ch 4,	abuseLooks like this is turning into Kim's Summer of Discontent. Definitely an underwhelming line, "I guess I'll tag along with Ron." Intriguing build up (to a blow-up?) brewing between Kim and Ron, it seems. And the town hall meeting is a nice metaphor for the confused state of tension between our teen heroes in the aftermath of a global catastrophe. I'm with Bonny on this one: if space aliens destroyed one of the Taco Smells, McD's, (fill in the blank) in my town, sentimentality isn't a good enough reason to bring it back. (on the cute side, I liked the interaction between Rufus and Hanna over the pancakes). Look forward to seeing where the story goes next...
Cerdwyn3 2007-12-02 ch 2,	abuseI must say I am so happy to see that someone else caught on to as how Ron is the Great Blue! I cant wait to read more too about Ron's big desicions ^_^
gir 2007-12-01 ch 4, anon.	abuseokay chapter took you long time you should make ron kim and there enimies and larwardia team up agenst some all powerful alien race maybe ron is the great blue after all is monkey power aura is blue and then some intergalctic peace between the humans,larwardians and all other race through out the universe that would be pretty good
General Quin 2007-12-01 ch 4,	abuseHey, great chapter, I can't wait fot the next chapter. This is a really great story. Update soon!
General Quin 2007-11-29 ch 3,	abuseThis story is really great and has a pretty good start so far. Update soon please!
a 2007-11-29 ch 3, anon.	abusehey pal update now
Lady Rhetorica 2007-11-09 ch 3,	abuseBigger than life new villians... The Possibles camping out at the Stoppable... and Dr.D and Shego adjusting to joining one of the good guys... All the makings for a terrific post graduation epic. Don't know if you had this in mind, but it seems Dr. D's new plant body seems to act out his impulsive side. There seems to be an intriguing Freudian thing going on, with lots of dramatic/romantic/humorous potential: the id/ego/superego sides of Drakken pulling him (literally at times) in various directions. And Shego makes a perfect foil. Great line from Shego, by the way "he's such a pansy."
Comet Moon 2007-10-20 ch 2,	abuseWicked
theotherdave 2007-10-19 ch 1,	abuseNice start. Does Kim asking Ron to help rebuild the house mean that he is still getting annual royalty payments for the Naco, since you usually don't get just one payment?
General Quins 2007-10-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat start on the story so far, I really look forward to future updates. Keep on writing, man, i so have to get my own log in.
DrBeat 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseI'll definatly catch you later. This story looks great!
Comet Moon 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseNice prolog Look forward to more Ja ne Jim
technogrl15 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abusethats a good start! keep up the good work!
acosta perez jose ramiro 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseVery good start. Nice scenes all the way, and every player is perfectly in character. Keep the good writing.

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