This was cute.
You really have great potential as a writer.
I think you have a rare natural writing talent that is hard to find these days.
Keep writing,
XoRaima.

AW SO CUTE X3~!


kyaa i love kiba hina :D!

kibahina is also my #1 Favorite couple!
they are soo cute together!
and kiba cares for hinata very much, which is really sweet
KIBAHINA!

That was so cute, short, but I still loved it. KibaHina is also my favorite couple, hope you write more.

The was cool. I've never seen one like this before but I really liked it. Im a HUGE KibaHinata fan so I loved this.

nice!! xD

I loved it. So cute and short.
Good story.

aw- that was really cute ^^ good story!!

Second to last line. Right there. Hit home. *clutches chest*

I want to crawl inside your brain and see just HOW you do it!!

... and now, review aside, I know why you've ditched us!! It's because we're n00bs, isn't it? XD You're getting together with Goldberry and NessieGG, and that's why you can't affiliate with us lesser humans!! I've got yer number here, missy.

^_^ We can't help but love you, tho'.

~Bya

This is the reason I became I KibaHina fan:]

This was short and beautiful. Well done

aww... so cute. I love KibaxHina, they make an adorable couple.

This is just beautiful, so short, yet so wonderful. The way it is written is so amazing in all it's simplicity. Love it!

Really nice. I'm not a big KibaHina fan but I like how you wrote it. The descriptions are very fitting and I also like the way it's laid out. Good job. keep it up!