Very good. This is solid work. And the ending is simple and elegant.

This is just beautiful. The bits of Toph being sarcastic rocked. And Aang and Katara are so cute together.

Oh my. That was quite lovely. It felt just like a part of Avatar, a separate episode, and I especially loved the ending line.

you just made me remember why I am a fan of your work. I like it. It was beautifully written and well executed. Keep up the good work.

That was lovely! It was so beautifully; your writing flows gorgeously, and it creates such vivid images. The description,the grammar and the punctuation (all the things silly flamers might flame you for) were all brilliant!

I loved the ending; you didn't un-needingly (is that a word?) drag it out. And everyone can just imagine the cute, fluffyness that will happen afterwards. :p

Just...keep it up! it been a long time since I've read such a well written piece and I'm so glad I did! Best wishes,

TotalTVAddict

Man! That was amazing! -clap- -does a dance-

(I wish fanfiction had emoticons like deviantart! They get the point across so much better than words alone!)

Anyway, I LOVES IT! -huggles-

*gasp* CONTINUE SOON! LOVE T! LOVE IT! LOVE ITT!

This was lovely. I love Kataang that looks past kisses and confessions and focuses the other part of their relationship. Great Job!

That was so sweet! It was extremely original...I wish I could write like you.

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