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| Lachesis 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is just beautiful. The bits of Toph being sarcastic rocked. And Aang and Katara are so cute together. |
| JT 2007-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my. That was quite lovely. It felt just like a part of Avatar, a separate episode, and I especially loved the ending line. |
| narutorasengankage 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseyou just made me remember why I am a fan of your work. I like it. It was beautifully written and well executed. Keep up the good work. |
| Nani Kakau 2007-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was lovely! It was so beautifully; your writing flows gorgeously, and it creates such vivid images. The description,the grammar and the punctuation (all the things silly flamers might flame you for) were all brilliant! I loved the ending; you didn't un-needingly (is that a word?) drag it out. And everyone can just imagine the cute, fluffyness that will happen afterwards. :p Just...keep it up! it been a long time since I've read such a well written piece and I'm so glad I did! Best wishes, TotalTVAddict |
| cheesebot12 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseMan! That was amazing! -clap- -does a dance- (I wish fanfiction had emoticons like deviantart! They get the point across so much better than words alone!) Anyway, I LOVES IT! -huggles- |
| Aangsfan 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuse*gasp* CONTINUE SOON! LOVE T! LOVE IT! LOVE ITT! |
| FourNations93 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely. I love Kataang that looks past kisses and confessions and focuses the other part of their relationship. Great Job! |
| DuHSPaZZiNGFeL 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! It was extremely original...I wish I could write like you. -faves- |