awesome,do more!

Wow - your use of imagery is fantastic, you really create such vivid (and in this case disturbing) pictures in the reader's head. I loved it, particularly how you're never quite sure what's real and what is only in the boy's head. The whole thing was haunting, in a way, and one of those pieces of writing I don't think I'll be able to forget about for a while. I honestly have no idea who it is, I'm assuming not Harry as some people have said, possibly... Grindlewald? Nope, I doubt it. Riddle? God, I really hope you're one of the authors who review replies, cos I want to know now! Anyway, this was excellent, and I'd love to see you do more HP fanfic in the future. You're very talented. Oh, and if you want something ok-ish to read feel free to visit my profile :) Well, you did ask, and I was just the only one desperate enough to say!

"His eye’s were quite glazed..."
Shouldn't be an apostrophe there.

Excellent word choice, and yeah, the first person who came to mind was Harry, and then Lockhart, but then not Lockhart 'cause Lockhart's not really /that/ young.

Was that Harry?
Geezness, that was incredibly well written, but creepy all the same.
*shivers*
aNYWAYS, GREAT JOB!

This is well written but I think you should change your summary. No offence but it sucks and I think thats why people don't read your fic. But nonetheless, I loved this!

Pinky x XD o.O

hah!

thats good

maybe he really is insane

reminds me of a maximum ride fic

I really liked that - it's a sad little snippet, but I like all the clever phrases - how London is a stretched postage stamp, and the frost is like a spider's legs. You express the mood really, really well. I'd love to see more.

I don't. who is it?