u can cry if u want but plz write more

Yes! Next chapter please and Keep writing!

OK. Fist of all i really liked the idea of the story. Very cute indeed. Especially how Bloo's all in love and that, very sweet, ^_^.
But i gotta say, i think you made Bloo out to be a little TOO loving towards pink, like I'm just saying, i thought it was a tiny bit out of character, but that's just my opinion. Also, Bloo does have a heart. He is a nice guy underneath, he's more selfish that evil. And the only negative thing i have left to add is that the story moves too quickly i think. Kinda hard to get REALLY into it.
Now for the positive! Duchess trying to commit suicide down the toilet! That made me LMAO! I can just imagine her having such a tantrum that she would result to that. LOL. Nicely put in. Also i would say that wilt's character came across very well. as much as i love wilt, i just had to laugh when he got knocked out, but i doubt you would use CPR on someone who got knocked out. LOL. Still funny though. Also i kinda laughed when i read about how she was bleeding all over her bed. I like, thought she got her period or something, ad i just LMAO! I also like P!nk's character, she seems to be very complex, which is always interesting to read because what she thinks and does is unpredictable.
In all i would have to say that this story is a little bit dramatic, but at the same time quite interesting and funny. i look forward to reading the rest. TC.
- Vjpokie2u

I thought Bloo became a jokster to help Mac against his brother? Oh well I love this story! I wonder if P!ink will ever get over it or she might find her creator.(Thou it doesn't seem likely)

At least you updated yay! :D I can't wait to see more. Continue it! You're really great.

what is your deviant art name?

i love it it is better on here than when you told me it (no offense) and Green rules thx for the doll :)

Wt..? P!nk! Bloo LOVES you!

I like the name. ^__^ And I like the story. Update soon plz. :D

i like the story so far. update soon please :)

Guess she DIDN'T know. LOL. I like this story! When you first started describing the baby I done thought she had a baby! (that's not really possible, but yeah... Lol)

Where did she... he... IT come from? Did P!nk imagine it? Plz update soon!

I wonder if she knows she's in "Poos" bed? xD

“Duchess just flushed herself down the toilet in attempt to commit suicide!!”



LOL!

That was awesome! I giggled a lot in this chapter *v*

done sorry but once again well done Ps to Bob the Great fan's I gave chris the pizza guy the new name