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myrtlegroggins
2009-07-26 . chapter 3
So, I'm sitting here watching the first CI ep in a long time and unf. it has to be Alex without Bobby...Anyway, it made me think of the good ole' days with the good ole' fanfiction. Where the heck have you been? Haven't heard from you in a couple of years, it seems.
JackSam
2008-07-05 . chapter 3
Love it. Add more soon.
EVILinnocence666
2008-03-05 . chapter 3
:( I always check on this story because I want you to finish writing it! OO Please write more! Juicy wedding night would be nice too.
I-am-LMR
2007-11-29 . chapter 3
Oh, I'm *almost* glad I haven't read this one sooner, because then I would have REALLY been in suspense for a long time, and hopefully I won't have long to wait now, hint, hint. Another fantastic chapter and I love the way you dealt with Joe without getting all angsty and depressing. Thank you for this gem!
I-am-LMR
2007-11-29 . chapter 2
"You're nice." That's adorable. You write Nathan very well for someone with "no maternal instincts." He's fantastic, and I loved to see him and Bobby interacting. So well written, as always and *so* cute!
boohoo650
2007-11-16 . chapter 3
Wow. This was really good. I was incredibly moved by the scene with Alex and her mother at the end of the chapter when her mother tells her that the world is full of surprises. It is so nice to see that the mother daughter bond develops more fully and gets stronger as children age. I also really enjoyed that Bobby has made Nathan's list. Very sweet. You really are getting good at doing fluff without being too fluffy and I really really like that. We both know about our mutual aversion to pouring the sugar on too thick. Great job. I can't wait for more. And don't be discouraged by what I can see are not very many reviews for this chapter. I think readership is way down around here these days. Unfortunate, especially when talent like yours is in full force.
KendraC
2007-11-15 . chapter 3
A chapter full of all-too-true advice, sweet moments, and priceless humor. I know you said you don't like writing fluff, but you do a fantastic job of keeping it from becoming too sugary. I was thrilled to see this chapter, and I can't wait for the rest.
rindy713
2007-11-13 . chapter 3
m, lots of good stuff in this chapter. i'm holding out hope that nathan will decide it's cool to be the ring bearer for aunt alex and uncle bobby. that was neat about bobby making his short list. sissy was hilarious! glad alex didn't let any of that upset her. and the talk between her and her mom was priceless.
Secret Phoenix 679
2007-11-13 . chapter 3
Absolutly love it :) Glad your back ;)
Koi
2007-11-13 . chapter 3
You are doing a great job of just sticking to fluff :-)
Marish89
2007-11-13 . chapter 3
Nice and fluffy! Please continue!
Metisse
2007-11-13 . chapter 3
Can't wait to see if Nathan will go through with it after all. I love happy endings for Bobby and Alex. :-)
guitar73girl
2007-11-13 . chapter 3
How many times do I have to say it? ALYSSA CAN DO FLUFF. REALLY WELL. Was that loud enough from across the atlantic?

A girl's wedding day is special and you're making it that way - it's sentimental without being mawkish. I loved how you concentrated on Alex,her Mom and their relationship. Alex's vulnerability comes through in a real way and her Mom's words of wisdom and counsel really hit the mark. Loved the bit about getting to take the baby home - her Mom knows what worries Alex.

Loved the little interchange over Nathan - Bobby has definitely got the seal of approval. And Sissy is an enchanting little character. I love her spunk and overexcitement and what's that they say about 'out of the mouth of babes'? That line was classic - vintage Alyssa.

As was this one - “Uh, actually—I can. Would’ve saved me about five years’ worth of cheap dates.” Excellent installments with just the right mix of humor, sentimentality and sass.
gorengal
2007-11-01 . chapter 2
Aw, Lewis as Benjamin Braddock. I love Lewis. More Lewis later, please?

I'm glad they're already married, because we wouldn't get to see them so relaxed here.
myrtlegroggins
2007-10-29 . chapter 2
/sigh/ *You're nice* So cute!

*But she didn’t say nothing about funny clothes or walking straight* LOL! Poor kid.

*How was it possible that I could be so bad at this? I’d always done well with Eames’ other nieces and nephews, but when it came to the one that really mattered it was as if I had horns on my head and a big red ‘Pariah’ stamped across my chest.*

I can't *wait* to see Bobby with his own kid.
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