This was beautiful. I actually cried as Ryan prayed over Val. Keep up the great Christian writing. God bless.

This is a very insprination(sp) story. Thank you for posting this. God Bless You!..

I love it!
I sort of figured out it was Julie in between the time you first went to her POV to the time when she was going through Valerie's purse. Reading so many suspense/mystery books come in handy...
It was a great story, all in all

As annoying as I always find it when this happens, I'm unable to say anything except 'Wow!' This was amazing. The detail is incredible, and your use of words was perfect. It was almost like I was their right along side Valerie, through all of it. Congratulations on an amazing and inspiring story.

You made me cry! Gosh darn it, you made me cry! This was very well written, and I loved it. But, gosh darn it, you made me cry and I NEVER cry!
So I guess that means you did a good job! :-D

I absolutely loved this! You write wonderfully . . . so much emotion running through the conversations, and throughout the story!! You're really talented with how you write. . .you should write more!

I don't even know where to begin...first of all, I was so excited to see a new Left Behind story! And I was extremely, pleasantly surprised with yours. That was, quite possibly, the best fanfiction I have EVER read! You captured so much emotion - I was literally shaking and my heart was pounding at the climax. And I nearly cried when Valerie finally accepted Christ. You have a great gift for writing - please write more!

I have to admit, you scared me there for a minute - I thought Valerie had died. And although she would have been in heaven, I wanted something to happen between her and Ryan, LOL.