oh you change the title i thought you have a new story
anyway this is getting better and better.
i really want to know what going to happen next, what hephaistion going to do if he find out.
and this is really great update.
Hope you updated soon

Oh this was a great chapter...
I really enjoyed reading it and hoping you updated soon.
Good luck!
c",)

This is so sweet...
Alexander trying to commit suicide and he closed his eyes saw Hepahistion crying to his grave he couldn't do it
Really nice update
c",)

Hey,
This chapter was really funny when Alexander remove his undergarment to suprised hephaistion but mission is failed and he found out that was cleitus...LOL
Nice update :)
ok need the read the next part...

this is really wonderful hope you write more

Sweet, with potential. Tiny bit difficult to follow who's saying what though.