Beautiful.
Painful.
Happiness.

Simly amazing!
I love it, what more can I write? ^_^

Very cute! You should keep one doing more of these one-shots!

SHINE ON, MOONSTAR! lol!

aw, that's so sweet! ^_^ I love your metaphor!

aw...i love it!

This one is poetic and beautiful!
Very well done!

Very poetic.

Aw!
This is so sweet!
It had me crying!
sniff...

Lovely.
xvirus

*sniffs* Beautiful! Bravo! as always :D

Beautiful! Beautiful!! Terribly sad that little Rin had to die, but still, an excellent oneshot! You are seriously talented. ^v^

You make every story seem like they belong together (:

this was so sweet! omg It was amazing!

I LOVED reading this. Its so beautiful, and so accurate. Just thre right balance of angst and a happy ending. Great fic!