Might bee 9 chapters long but it is still awsome to read.

C.D.

yeah he alright now
those deceps wouldnt leave him alone
fraggers

Huh. It sounds like a very powerful Cybertronian version of the common cold or flu. But this is starting to get rather interesting.

its good

you know, Sunstreaker doesn't act all nice all the time.

and i think you can reword your writing too.

for example:

Sunscreen sighed heavily and growled, "Nothing Uncle. Just these two 'pretty boys' keep needing new paint jobs.

anyway its good. i hope they find a cure soon

so far soo good :)

I really feel sorry for Prowl

col you should keep goin

Oh man I think I know where this is going. Prowl's going to get worse with the virus isn't he? Still awsome dude. Keep going on this. Update this one a little more often please. Along with Twice the Pain and Four Times the Love (This one I'd like to have updated next for your fics. If you don't mind.)

C.D.

Prowler had some fun for once
evil deceps are planning again

The Twister bit reminds me of the sleepover episode on TF:Animated. Did you do that bit based off of that episode or something else? And it is an odd site to see Prowl watching an old movie. Maybe ya should of stuck a name of an old movie in the story that Prowl might like. I could think of one or two he might like. One of them being the 1980's version of The Elephant Man. That was a good movie, I watched that one in my Humanities class.

I like it. I would be laughing if I saw the twins/Sunscreen bit in the animated series. it would probably be funny to alot of people.

Chapter 8 please and keep up the good work.

C.D.

If I was in Bee's situation I would be that ** off too. I would probably find a way to hit Shockwave with super strength baseball bats and frying pans. And handheld laser guns.

PROWL'S GETTIN BETTER! HE'S GETTIN BETTER! WHOO HO!

Chapter 8 comin soon right?

Keep up the good work,

C.D.

Not bad. Not bad. I would've made Prowl's attack anit worse . Like some of his systems shutting down or something. But besides that not bad.

When's chapter 8 coming? Cause I want to know what's gonna happen to Prowl now.

Chapter 8 please. It's a very good story.

I would've added heavier coughing to the virus Prowl has. it would've been more convincing and/or some sort of sweating. And there should of been some sort of eating/drinking because it seems like he was starving himself or something around there.