ok its great make another story where fate and nanoha met differently where fate was a fallen angel killed thousands till nanoha saved her lol

Again, another great read. But one thing that bothered me throughout the story were the parts were you used italics. Honestly I felt they were missed used and kinda broke the flow for a moment rather than adding to it. All-in-all I enjoyed it.

that declaration of ending your work really, really fucked up my day. but i guess reading your stuff was fun and i dont regret spending my time on your page one bit.

im really glad that you put out Nanoha's point of view since it's, i guess, refreshing. it's interesting to see her thoughts on everything. what was going thru her mind as all these things happened to here and stuff. i really enjoy this one here.

this one is nice. it's kind of freaky how Fate just dominates Nanoha and i guess that Nanoha really does love Fate to let her first time be like that.

Faved.

EGGIE-CHAN! ;_;

I'm a bit sad that you have decided to stop writing in this fandom, as your works always had a certain uniqueness to them, and I enjoyed reading them very very much.

Whatever you decide to do next, I will continue to be a loyal and avid reader of yours, as I have been through all of the years that I have known you.

Love ya, Eggie-chan. Keep on writing love. Never stop, and we'll all enjoy your next tale together when its made ;3

~Shauna

very nice

You know, however hard I try I just can't see Fate reacting to an accident. She would certainly be upset by it, but I can't really imagine her tearing herself apart like that. But that's just my opinion.

Ow. I just come back from holidays and... ow.

I know I said I could die happy when this fic was finished but... I can't. I will die happy the day you come back and I can give you cookies and ice cream XD Aw, really, you have been one of the bests writers in this fandom. And probably you always be. For me, at least. And this may sound dumb, because I don't know you, but I'll miss you. And miss your awesome fics too, of course. I'll continue lurking on you lj anyway xD

And about this chapter... What can I say? I have no doubt now,this fic is my favourite from Nanoha fandom. It always made me cry, no matter how many times I read it. There is so much emotion into it, in each chapter.

You're great, Eagle, and I hope all goes well for you. Thank you for your being here and for the good and bad times I passed with your fanfiction *bows*

Hiatus is hiatus, it's probably better than my method. >>

A nice way of bringing this fic back to the beginning, though I admit I had to go back and remind myself which one it was, ehe.

Well, if that’s the case, take care of yourself then.

When is time to end something, you’ve to do it or else that resolve will crumble and your words will be labeled as mere lies to keep you from leaving. I’m telling you this because you’re honest with yourself, something rare these days. So, good bye…

For this last chapter, I guess Nanoha didn’t care anymore if their relationship was odd, because for her the most important thing was to stay by Fate’s side. It doesn’t matter if her actions and feelings are misplaced before the blonde’s eyes, meanwhile she can be there for her.

Gokurosama deshitta

Sigh, you impress me with your ability to make non-perfect / not-happy endings really impactful and perfect anyway. Like RoE, you had me brooding over that story for days (and throughout my Math paper, too :P) And like this.

I don't know,everything's just so real. Fate's pain, her hiding of it, her remorse, Nanoha's fear, doubts and all.

"Let me take care of you" - That line's going to be in my head for a very long time.

I've said it so many times you're probably tired of it, but THANK YOU for another great update.

PS: I find this weirdly sweet, (Nanoha's not giving up on Fate etc), but maybe that's just my nanofate senses working on overdrive xD Or reading fic at 5:14 am D:
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If you don't already know that I think you're one of the best writers out there, yeah I'm telling you again.

In a way, I'm really glad you got to meet Fate, since I guess she's got you writing and thinking about stuffs.

An update for RoE, Stigma and Expiation, just like you to leave with a bang and leave us wanting more :P You've definitely left your mark on the MSLN fandom. But still, a hiatus is just a break, and I'll wait for you to get back however long it takes, yes or no.

Take however long you want / need, and thank you so much, Eagle-sama.

Ah, I'm going to miss you. Hope you come back soon, I really like your storiers.

From time to time I have to come here and read this fic. I will never be tired of read it.

I couldn't put in words what I feel when I read this. Always let me speechless, and make me remember why I love it so much. Love the story, love the style, love it all.

The day you finish this I will die happy, I'm pretty sure XD

Whoa, Nanoha's perspective. And yes, I see you did add more detail to make it more Nanoha-ish. Awesome. :3 I hope you get to figure out Nanoha more for the other part.

And yes, is being a bitch. Don't waste your time editing your stories if they do another similar action - LJ would be a fine home for your lovely fics. :3 (I'm beginning to move there soon...if they do it again. It's a pain not being able to use brackets [now] and hyphens in summaries - gah.)